- Add quiet tension music
We decided to do this to add a subtle amount of sound and add a technical skill - Change font to typewriter
The cowboy style didn't really fit in with the genre of our film - Remove Assistant scene
The ambient audio that comes with the scene was of a bad quality so we decided to cut it altogether - Focus on the eyes
To draw the audience into the scene - Redo voiceover~ change script
The microphone was too close to our actors mouth, the script was not well thought out - Add in more street shots (to make up for cut out scene)
Cutting the assistant scene left our product at a very short length so we had to lengthen it. - Change title name (To Red Herring)
The surprising adventures of Mac Mayson was too cheesy.
Monday, 16 March 2015
First Draft Changes
After the first draft we analysed our product and decided to make the following changes:
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