First Draft Changes

After the first draft we analysed our product and decided to make the following changes:

• Add quiet tension music
  We decided to do this to add a subtle amount of sound and add a technical skill
• Change font to typewriter
  The cowboy style didn't really fit in with the genre of our film
• Remove Assistant scene
  The ambient audio that comes with the scene was of a bad quality so we decided to cut it altogether
• Focus on the eyes
  To draw the audience into the scene
• Redo voiceover~ change script
  The microphone was too close to our actors mouth, the script was not well thought out
• Add in more street shots (to make up for cut out scene)
  Cutting the assistant scene left our product at a very short length so we had to lengthen it.
• Change title name (To Red Herring)
  The surprising adventures of Mac Mayson was too cheesy.